By rail comes mail

[linear]

By rail comes mail
It comes, or it fails
To come, for not everyone writes

The train that shill bothers to come into town
Where nobody bothers to ask his pronouns

Is rolling and strolling
And smoking and riding
And driving away the night

Away from the pillow
The weeps of the willow
The quips of the sorrow
That soiled tomorrow

The butcher, the baker,
The candlestick maker,
The thoughts that needle and streak

Unwire and tire
And wear and tear
Vacating the future I seek

[Lake Bodom]

eminem was little too quite after this dropped

[Lake Bodom]

@The-Mods it does , im actually singing it xD

[TWŚ]

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[Janet]

@Lake-Bodom said in By rail comes mail:

eminem was little too quite after this dropped

Haha I liked this comment a lot ... hehe

@linear Thank you so much for posting this!!!

[TM]

@linear Lake already said It but this poem fit as a rap song lyrics lol :)

[Cold Sun]

@linear I can't tell if this is of indifference, nature or humor as it's quite confusing at the start, and the more I tried to interprete first time, I meet some phrases tricking me off but after giving it some time I come to understand everything. This indicates to me your level of thinking is so far from ordinary and am left wondering what kind of audience in had in mind🤓 Round of applause for such creativity coz poems are harder to work with and in most cases, there's that feeling one doesn't have reasonable word space to express everything but with high quality hypothalamus combined with brilliant use of ordinary events, you people give a brief picture in the readers' mind expressing everything.