@Raye Just a bit of a dance. Try not get much into brain.
Thoughts on the screenplay, please.
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So, I'm working on this teen/drama/coming-of-the-age movie. And, um it's based on a French movie called Jeune et Jolie which is an erotic drama.
It's about a 17 year old girl who is discovering her sexuality and in the process, becomes a prostitute. How her life changes afterwards, is what the story is about. Now please keep in mind that I'm just a beginner and it might be bad. But cut me some slack if you can.
Liberated (1).pdf
Comments are very much appreciated.
Again, if you do read it, please tell me what you think. I could really use the opinions.
Hope you have a good day :)
