What do you think about my lyrics or poetry or whatever it is just give me an honest opinion

[420_High]

It's dark blue, and dark dark black, and I don't know what to do but scream and laugh

I'm stuck like a glow, to my bed, even though, I don't have to, tell you, that my heart peeps so fast, that my viens gonna explode, that Im gonna break at last, that iam all alone dreaming fast
Take me away, or stop this cleche, of mixed blue, dark dark black and I dont know what to do but scream and laugh.

I wanna run away like I always do, see the moon or parented to be cool. But it's dark blue, nd dark dark black and I don't know what to do but scream and laugh.