Pretty cool dude, we need more grunge these days. I like those riffs but those songs needed some more crunch, especially on the second song. And some solos or outros would have really taken them to the next level.
Song is well done, and tight. I find it soothing but very, dull. Not saying bad, but like still water, not moving. When you kicked the heavy guitar, you really needed to bring it to the front, and increase the bass on the drums to maybe 180 degree phase, to bring in the tighter end. This makes your drama, that you are already doing, stronger..
You got good stuff.
@onyx_the_kitten You should travel back in time to the mid 00's, everyone was emo or goth back then 😁 I was emo too! As a teenager I dyed my hair black and listened to bands like MCR and Fall Out Boy XD I was cringy as fuck 😁