Read this out and rate my rhyming

[Eesha2197]

So when i was just lying on my bed i began to sing this thing please read and rate me 1/10( honestly please 😇😁) And the [ ] is are kind of a quiet voice

I thought it was full moon tonight [ but no] but the stars are shining bright [yeah they are] maybe my dad was right [maybe] cause he is the kid of the light [what] maybe i shouldn't have thrown a party tonight

Rate me in the comments! 😀😁

[Bad Taste]

10/10 would puke again. Thank you, whenever I feel nauseous, I will use this as a mean to let it all out.

[Eesha2197]

Ok i guess and thanks for the compliment 😁😁

[Alvsecret]

7/10 Good, but I don't know the beats, the rythm or the tones of it, I mean, if you want to do a try hard one, you put notes on the words, like this for example:
7 ㅤ4ㅤ ㅤ1ㅤ3ㅤ2ㅤ5ㅤ6ㅤㅤ5ㅤ7
I thought it was a full moon to-night

(This is just an example, so not really music)

Like that, it will take sometime, but it might work out.
But, if you don't want to do it, that's fine, that just means you're not a 'try hard'.
(ps. By try hard, I mean really try hard, translating your humming into tones is difficult, unless you have a tool to test the accuracy, then the spaces between the numbers there must use the special invisible character because the website just collapses a bunch of space clicks into 1.)