@Deimat This has a Lovecraftian vibe, I am intrigued. You could do some world building, expanding on the characteristics of the community, introducing some secondary characters, then elaborating on what the myth of the "child of eden" is, how did it allegedly started, something like that. If you are intending on writing a short tale, I would suggest you start with your main character and narrator recalling how they got to know the History of Bella, and go from there. It is a very interesting concept BTW this Eye of Duality.
Best posts made by Xandoré_BG
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RE: Im working on this writing and like I dunno how to continue... feedback???
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RE: I NEED A LOVER THAT WON'T DRIVE ME CRAZY, Have you ever had one? You love them but, they are BONKERS CRAZY!
@AXES That give is a thing that scarred me for life. not sure why, ever since I was 5 YO, that scene makes me want to be gay.
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RE: What's the best way to dispose of a body?
@sarah_the_magpie. A river. A rope. A stone. look for river with big fishes or alligators. You can always throw a body in a pig farm as well
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Sharing some youtube Gold
OK, so... I'm sure some of you might have already seen this one, but I feel compelled to share it anyways.
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RE: NSFW: What is your favorite corn video? 🌽
I'm more into Comedy Corn, you know? everybody has their own Kinky.
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RE: Diapers and feminine products are tax free in California
@Littlelion12 there is a market opportunity for a guy like in there then... I should buy some stuff there tax free, and sell in Brazil full taxed by me.
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RE: If you dont open this you are gay
@Fappy_Pills is this directed at someone specifically?
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RE: I am a bit lonely, all i am having r suicidal thoughts, please someone help me
@akshat-M17 have you tried some sort of hotline? There are multiple hotlines to help with that all across the globe. And don't dismiss it like it doesn't really help, not even you haven't given it a go. I know how hard it is to control those dark thoughts and desires, and I know no amount of advice or encouraging words help in those dark times, if you want, you can share your problems and thought with me. I will listen to it all without judgment or opinion. But also, try a hotline, give it a go
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RE: please say bad think about me.....
You gave me sexual dream with you because of those girly pics of yours... That's a bad thing you did for me.
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RE: Who would like to become a moderator to control TalkwithStranger ?
I'm around here a lot. i'm don't think i'm a toxic person, i dislike when people disrupt the chat with spam. i would like to help keeping the chat bearable to newcomers.
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RE: Bye all :')
that's unfortunate. i'm sorry. but, if you ever come back, mellow gal, we are right here, being stupid as always. stay strong.
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RE: Would you rather...
@WtfPoutindith hope you read mine frenchgirl.
1- oh damn... thats easy for me... first option... I could avoid so much grieavance if only i knew what I know now....
2- childless future? I can wait for my vasectomy so first option
3- for sure number one... I already feel like moving away from the city anyway. that would only make things more urgent.
4-oh.... easy pick for sure. nudes are already everywhere and I wouldnt like the creepy vibe this first option gives me... do you have any idea how much money you could make by having that second option? or how much you could literally change this fucked up world if you had just an measly inkling on what trump or xi jing pin or Putin's deep secret were? also, could you please make and addendum on this last one granting people immortality... I think as soon as you mention something bout putin or xijing ping deepest secrets a fucking zarabatana wielding spy would put you to sleep forever. -
RE: What things should friends never do?
I think friendship is supposed to be one of the most honest human relation. so, to be honest, i think a friend should not lie, and we should not be offended when the honesty of a friend hurt us...
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RE: If a person steals a loaf of bread because he needs to feed his starving family, should he be punished?
well, religion and justice tend to forgive these people, i guess it is pretty ok.... unless they stole from another hungry family....
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RE: What makes some people become criminals? Is it poverty, upbringing, lack of education, unemployment or something else?
lack of hope, education, self-respect, empathy, in this order, as i see thing in my country. The lack of resources, faith and jobs are like waaaaaay down the list of probable causes, i guess.
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RE: Just sharing a thought...
@John_Freeman thats some great advice man. thanks for sharing that thought.
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RE: 🐦Are you a night owl or an early bird?🐦
@sarah_the_magpie fucking awesome gift. Also. Staying up late messes up with me head
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RE: What's the story behind your username?
@sarah_the_magpie lol... Big guy sounds alright. I am big.