A unknown Girl, Not so unknown now
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There is a girl,
Little shy, little innocent,
Sometime stubborn,
Hmm, About her Anger I don’t know
She don’t trust anyone, his past is stopping her
It’s a life, you can’t live without trust on anyone,
You have to trust someone.
She didn't want to bother anyone, but She in trouble
So just find someone to talk
And She thinks, no one will understand her
But You know, “Try First, because those who try never give up”
I know she is very strong, and she will never give up
She just have to believe in yourself, that’s the most powerful thing
This unknown girl, not so unknown Now ...If there are visions then look at the scene, See the whole universe in me.
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I know about its flaws, but sometimes flaws make things beautiful...:tada: :pen: :v:
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@JamesBond007 I love that... Where u get the idea because that is magnificent. so lovely
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Very strong text do you have there! Thank you for sharing
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@Rissa_TheBest Thanks. Idk, I think it's the effect of your company... Two creative minds...:smile:
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@JamesBond007 Haha yep, U did great on that tho. So heart felt and genuine, I love it so much. Better than all my stories combined, :)
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@Rissa_TheBest Thanks again. I just tried.This is My first attempt is in English poems, usually I write in Hindi. But your stories are great and heart-touching, no one can match your level...
If there are visions then look at the scene, See the whole universe in me.
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@JamesBond007 Thank ya, but if I keep saying compliments on how good this poem is then this will go on for ever. lol :)
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sometimes we trust people they talk good thing about us when we are with them and when we are not with them they keep saying shit about us so it very hard to trust anyone at this time...............
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@tutu_98 Yup, u are right. But all people are same. So if u want to find someone good, someone special... then you have to trust someone. In this some break your trust, but when you find your Trustworthy... these all doen't matter
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tbh i had goal to stay with the guy i love and i trust him more then my parents but now got nun im just living my life without any goals
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@tutu_98 You will find some one good them him. In this world someone, somewhere is waiting for you, just see around you. And you said about goals, I think stay with people never be success goal, so find some thing that u want from your life... It's a life... never give up
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@JamesBond007 I think you need to write more poems in English. You are an inspiration to many people and I am sure that many girls/women can relate to this poem
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@Sunny_Bee Thanks. if these lines can inspire someone, that's enough for me... I definitely see forward about English poems
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@JamesBond007 That’s very good! Keep it going! Where does your inspiration comes from to write this poem?
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@Sunny_Bee ,I am a shy or say very shy person. I don't talk to much. so I think what I have inside in me, that coming out through in this words.
When u don't have any courage or no one to talk to you I think this is the best way. Bcz what's inside you must come out, and after you feel light and free. That I feel. -
@JamesBond007 Then it’s indeed the best way to express yourself by playing with words and making art of words, like poems. If you feel like to talk with someone, for every kind of subject, feel free to send me a message. :)
