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Posts made by lostintrees
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RE: Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing
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RE: Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing
Morning at the water
Mist rose from the river this morning. The sun's rising cast the early light. In the cool of the raveen, some apparition illuminates, lingering and still. As stumbling upon deer, cautiously frozen, awaiting my next move. It loomed above the moving mirrored surface. Silently hovering. The constant rush over rocky river bed below fills all the space in my ears. The damp air smells of wood and earth, hints of cedar. It strikes some soothing chord within me. I close eyes and breathe the verdant essence of lush loam and lichen. The sounds of life force rushing its watery path. No ranger am I, but I feel inside that part of me has been here through my eternity. Like some ancient spirit of the forest that forgot its home. My fingers push through the moss and feel it's sponge. My feet through the grass and gravel, sand between my toes. No street can give me, no buildings strike awe, no home or garden holds the wonder, of the trails I've followed along.
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RE: Poetry - write your own.
Cool Thread! Thanks for the opportunity to share...
Intimate words from my scribbled pocket books...Torn
When in night she shines bright as the morn,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
My cool winds surround where her body is warmIntangible being that lies with your form,
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To raise from within cravings yet to be bornFrom below you the tangles I have parted and shorn
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To be nearer to flesh and never forewarnThrough rooms that are locked, free spirits to soar
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn.
To lurk among briars of desire forlornAnd find upon my head if unscorned
Flawed, scarred, tasseled and torn
The crown of your secret gently adornedFlawed, scarred, tasseled ...and torn.
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RE: I used to think the worst thing in life is to end up all alone. It's not. The worst thing in life is to end up with people who make you feel all alone.
This is very astute. Some people dont exude love. Some tend to take rather than to give. Finding people who build you up, encourage and inspire you, that is our quest. Cheers to you and to friendships of great meaning as well as casual benevolence. :)
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RE: Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing
@lostintrees ... please message me to review more...
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Seeking readers for poetry and creative writing
Would love to get opinions on my sensual work with words. Anyone interested in romantic/sensual creative writing and poetry inspired by desire and artistic description?
High light
Something about the way the light just touched your face
In this room of windows
The two of us.Present tense
Silently sitting
Casting anxious nets at the open hours so fleeting
Individual leisure during the daylight?
Unheard of.Cloth and needle
Pencil and scratchWhen some fractal of sun came seeking you
To think like I do
To see itself through the filter of you
Like some visible radar from heaven
To be closer to what only I know
To speak to me
Like a beacon of angelic light
To show you in some semblance of productive peace
To give you over to my imagination
Like I needed any help.