@I-Queen In my opinion as a fanfic writer I say it’s awesome, I love the descriptiveness and the fact that peter is a girl, however I think with the plot you could play a bit like switch tony for Bucky or Steve and peter for a reader type of an oc, I love the original yes but I think you could play a bit with the characters or the plot too, make pep much more smart than tony I think that will take your story to a next level.
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