Everyone looses ppl here
Just a poem I wrote out of frustation
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I've been thinking lately,
What actually went wrong,
Everything's going so quickly,
But it's still taking so long.Now what do I do?!
I was so stupid to have a crush on you,Nothing really works out between us,Yet I headed off to catch the wrong bus....It's like digging your own grave,
But to be honest,for you I still crave,
I shouldn't have been so naive,
Should've stopped when I was entering the wrong cave!!That darned love for you,
It's flying away but where to??
What the hell is wrong with my heart??!!
Feels like it's just missing one part.I wish so much that we were meant to be,
But now it doesn't seem like that to me,
I've honestly lost my heart's key,
So can someone please find it and unlock the heart for me???? -
heyy! @Abby-83 how is this one???
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@lucifer_ Dude this one's not as good lel
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@phobiac You are writing something which isn't "hit me up" or "send nudes" or "12 year old kid looking for gf"..
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@lucifer_ Thanks then lol XD
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@PhObiAC This resounds so much with me and my current position in life. Love, love, love it. Keep it up. :)
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@ms_e thanks man.I'll try to help u guys with all thatπππ
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It's really good would you like to join my writers group? We always love to hear new stories and poems!
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@abby-83 Sure!!Thank you soo muchπβΊ
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@phobiac no problem! I'll try to read everything you write me and Us Poet try to read everything we see! Have fun writing!
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woow thats super awesome and well defined one line to the next, big up. never let that part of u go no matter what, best lines ive read in a while.
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@phobiac Well what a nice poem you got here.
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