@Shardana Quickly Dm Me! I wanna know your questions.
Rate my works pls thnx
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The Coat
The winding streets within the night
The bright morning day over no dark city,
The folds and creases within the fabric,
That shroud which was worn by far too manyLet alone what shall remain
Keep the figure from all that lives
Keep your secrets and please refrain
From taking that which always givesMysterious clouds above the sky
Ask the figure, why oh why
Standing there, in a coat distorted
Standing by to shriek and cryBut I know of the stories told
I have seen them all unfold
With many tears the people shed
Night to day they rest in bedFar from him they choose to be
Keeping far from grasp they seek
That poisonous coat which leeches souls
Those eyes which are two pits of coal
Those eyes which contain but two black holes
The coat worn by many, my life it stole -
@Equinox @Freedom-Writers-Writing
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Very good
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@Equinox it's beautiful
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@Equinox some strong imagery there, very dark and bleak, i like it
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@Equinox Cool man! You've got skill in poetry 😁
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Realized i didnt thank you guys for the feedback, so thanks! Means a lot!
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@Equinox you're welcome and thanks for sharing, its very good
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@Equinox i'll give u a+
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@OnlyChild_Boi aye, thanks
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@Equinox @anonymous92
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@Equinox
Amazing work man! 4 and a half stars for you! :star: :star: :star: :star: and a half!
Hahaha! XD