Dissapointed
HEY I WRITE A POEM FIRST TIMER warning its meh and im doing better now so respect my words of wisdom------i hope USPOET is impressed........praying to god for that
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@im-bored well im impressed
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You have good sense of poetry 👍
Perfect for bye
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@steve-roger farewell my brother thanks for being a friend
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Exceelently done ...i'm impressed.
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ITS FANTABULOUS
I cannot write like you guys.
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i think i'm in love
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@im-bored
There are some typos, and a few places that I had to reread a few times to understand what you where trying to say, but I like the overall message, and what you where trying to say. It's really good for a first poem.
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@im-bored
Amazing, simply amazing.
smh, I don't know how to upload gifs.
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Aye really great!
I agree with @US-poet that there are a few typos and things to patch up, but it sounds really good to me and I hope you keep on writing and sharing your poems Bored 😄