@Wicked_ Why do all the great people I know underestimate themselves too much?
This will be “Memories”
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You sit on the edge of my mind
There but not there
A ghost forever haunting
The dark corners
At the edge of my vision I turn
Trying to catch a glimpse of you
Then I focus
I’m instantly transported
To another time
Another place
Then my senses are assaulted
I can see taste feel you
I’m overwhelmed
And all at once
I reach out
And you disappear
Like a shadow
You were but a memory -
Nice one there elena
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@Martin_488 thanks glad you like I’ll have to tell Sabina I posted a new one lol
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@ClaireSheppard Wonderful, in many ways, and on many levels.
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@Lazz smiles thanks you inspired it
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@ClaireSheppard Pretty sure she'll like it too
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that memory is the light in this endless dark tunnel.....i know that feeling ....ur poems r so deep ...i'm just in love with them...it was superb!!!!!
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@ClaireSheppard That's a amazing poem
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simply beautiful my friend!
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@Gorlwithanime thanks you do great stuff yourself
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@happymiss thanks I just write what flows lol
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@trevorgrand20 thanks
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all good time of the day, please note, I ran out of money (((could you help me out please, who can do as much((
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@ClaireSheppard Very nice! :)
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@ClaireSheppard YOU are a darling and delight. Made this cross my mind:
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@Gorlwithanime Mad mad mad skills
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@ClaireSheppard well done fellow poet, well done
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@ClaireSheppard
You are there, yet I cannot see you.
You call my name, yet I cannot free you
You reach for my hand, yet still miss my grasp,
You take away my breath, yet I still have to gaspYou've stricken me dead with persistent hatred,
I know not what you have planned here
You search for my being
Ignore all of my fleeing
You torment my soul, with powers, sacred,I am my own, and prisoner to none
I am my own, my will weighs a ton
You've lost once, my friend
And you will lose again
For this, I am sure
The battle is won -
@Equinox that’s really good. I loved it
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@ClaireSheppard thanks!