What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
If I could frame our love.
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Beautifully written that was amazing
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@abby-83 why thank you, but I only did it because you gave me the idea, so this wouldn't exist without you.
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@us-poet teach me teach me!! Teach me and no one gets hurt!!
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@ragnar my secret is practice, and www.rhymezone.com
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Wow ! That's something incredible.
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@anup123 I appreciate your kind words.
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@us-poet damn thank you sm 😣
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@kimmy159 I appreciate you saying that greatly.
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beautifully written
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@cocopuff18 thank you so much for saying that. It means a lot.