What an awesome rhyme scheme! It's very whimsical, and flows quite well. I enjoyed your slight change in the meter you practiced in certain parts. Keep writing, this was great!
What’s missing from me
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I found a woman so strong
Stronger than anyone I know
We share dreams and hopes
I want to share so much more
I can hear her heartbeat from a thousand miles
I know what heaven looks like when she smiles
When her arms wrap around me
I know where I belong
I need her every night and day
She takes away my heartache and grief
She makes all my troubles seem small
She makes my heart soar through the clouds
I want her I love her
I feel like the sun has set
When she’s gone
And when I see her again
I feel like the stars shine just for her presence
She makes me warm in the long dark
She consumes my every thought
She’s become my world
And I say I love you
But it can’t begin to express
All that I feel from your caress
I’m so happy to be with you
You complete my soul
So entwined with yours
You’re what’s missing from me@Cosmic_Lady you and others said I should post it took me longer than anticipated but here it is posted. I love you and I want to thank you for everything you do for me
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@Wicked_
Her river moves through me
guiding and shaping the spirit in me
that rises from our souls
ebbing and flowing tides of life
making us one --
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