This goes to all people that have posted a reply to this topic. "The Word Imperfect Actually Spells I'm perfect coz everyone here is perfect in his or her own imperfect ways." And to all those still shy to find themselves a TWS Self Addressed Envelope to reply back to me, yours is my permission to make you shine again. All rights reseved. Meet you all on the dry river bank. And for all those that may think this has been a waste of time, feel free to let me predict your dirty handwritings even through your text messages. Jk. I remain that same sb you could call son of a..... at your own risk. Im outta here.
"Questions" poem
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Will you catch me
when I fall ?
If I need to lean
can you be my wall ?Could you keep me safe
from troubled men ?
When I awake
will I see you again ?My love for you
it's not going away
Til the end of time
Come what mayAre you the one
who'll take my hand
Kiss me on the beach
as we lay in the sandWhen fear comes calling
will you hold me tight ?
In the deepest darkness
be my lightCan you be different
not like the rest?
Life is hard, and our love
it WILL testI just need to know
that with you I'm secure
When I don't hear from you
it makes me unsureHave I done something wrong ?
Said something bad ?
Perhaps I did a thing
that made you madI know I'm a handful
but I don't ask for much.
Just keep me safe, hold me
I crave your touchPlease let it be
Let me walk by your side
Perhaps maybe later
I could be your brideFor I never dreamed
I could meet one like you
So strong and gorgeous
intelligent tooWhere are you love ?
I miss you so
You are my vice
I cannot let go© January 3, 2020, L. Karriem
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I really enjoyed the meter and the clean structure. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme. all In all I think it was lovely, and well done!