@someone216 yeah i get it, i understand how hard it is to break up and how bad you would feel, but please, make no mistake, first time that you feel like somebody else might be better person for you, thats the signal you should always take, no exceptions. And i will repeat myself sorry, but, if you break up now it will be a lot easier than looking back to this moment 2 years from now and wandering what life would be like if you had broken up while it was not too late. Trust me, i myself had a relationship that i didnt want to end because of feeling the grief, but you are doing him more damage by staying with him while you dont really, truly want that, than to leave him straight. I know its hard, but its for the best. Thats my advice, hope you get your feelings sorted out.
Only Just A Dream
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I open my eyes and your there to see
Laying there peacefully as you sleep
I close my eyes and sigh with bliss
There cannot be anything better than this
He is with me and only me
He wants nobody else as I can see
I can't help but imagine our life together
I can see us staying forever
Now that I open my eyes once again
I realize it was just a dream and I begin to descend
I descend in emotions for I am not with you
But it's okay because one day I'll have my Shoe...Love you Boots
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Aww I love you Abbs! 👑💓😍😚
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@abby-83 Perfect couple 😊💓❤❤💓
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@boots22 I love you handsome!😍🖤😚
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@cutie-cat thank youuu!!🤗
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@abby-83 hahahahahah the best part is the ending. I love this poem.
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@abby-83 Welcome 😊😊
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@us-poet thank you poet!
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@Abby-83
I dreamed of you standing right next to me,
There cannot be anything better than this
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..tbc..
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@BOOTS22 this is the very example of the "nothing lasts forever, forever is just a lie" kinda thing.
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Ok I really loved the flow in the first 4 stanzas. The ending kinda hit me like a stop sighn.Had me all awwws then bam.
Lol this was a decsent write though out of what I have seen on this site the best yet.
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@Abby-83 I love this beautiful poetry!
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Helo ....