@sup Aw! Thank you soooooo much :D
Posts made by FearlessWoman
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RE: So, Here's my poem!
@anup123 Aww! You really made my day by saying that... :)
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RE: So, Here's my poem!
@bugsbunny Really?! I thank you soooooo much!! I just can't express how happy I am to know that!!!
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RE: So, Here's my poem!
@us-poet OH!! I get it. I should work on that!
Besides thank you so much for that :D -
So, Here's my poem!
So, this is for the first time ever I am writing a self-written poem here! Believe me, @US-poet inspired me to share one! She is an amazing poet and since I can't write as beautiful as hers, here's the best I came up with!
If you know me, you know that I am obsessed with Pegasus :)
This poem is dedicated to my Pegasus (when I Will have one in future because THEY ARE LOVE)
I'm really nervous since I had never shared my poems to anyone except my parents!
sighs
Alright, I talk too much...
so here it goesI should have been known
the moment you flew away
I would have been known
when you blew it with a neighI love you more than as a pet
since I grabbed you as we met
Now, I see you as my jet
but wait, we haven't finished yetI first saw you in the light
the light was too bright
I love holding you tight
my sweet little pegasus whiteIf my dad had ever found you
He would rebuke the princess
But he wouldn't mind you
If you proved him in lessI will never force you
To do things for me
I will never get a source
to tie on the strings for meNo one knows that
you have a dragon inside
every day your voice grows
you are a wagon insideYou have soft and sensitive features
would never think of you using as a leather
everyone saw you as a hater
I don't care, we promised to stay togetherWhen we hear an attack in the castle
getting cracks on the passel
this time, with a nice bite of trouble
together well fight with a blow of our bubbleI peeked on you behind that tree
and you were shining in the daylight
I freaked when you were behind me
we were surrounded by the black nightI couldn't imagine myself on a flight
Sitting on your back getting myself excite
hoping that I will be alright
keeping my lungs airtightWe flew higher and higher
I was in a gleam
and then I saw a ball of fire
of course, I was in a dreamI know, it's a pretty long poem and the fact that there are so many grammatical mistakes!
I guess in a poem, in order to make things rhyme, sometimes you gotta ignore these mistakes... so...Please tell me how it is and how you feel about it! Especially you @US-poet
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RE: HAPPY WOMANS DAY 🎁🎉
@ragnar That was really nice and beautiful and I really liked it :)
It was inspiring and I wish all women could think like that... -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRIYANKA!!
I WISH YOU A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRIYANKA! Trust me, you are so sweet and supportive to your friends that it's just wonderful! With our sweetest of talks and our sweetest of humor... you are a real sweetheart.
You're a spoonful of sugar, a drop of syrup and a dot of honey. HAVE THE SWEETEST BIRTHDAY EVER -
RE: What to do when your bored ?
@sarah I usually listen to music and if not that,
I read my books and if even not that,
I watch some Netflix and if even not that,
I write some stories and if even not that,
I sleep. lol -
RE: Who's your favorite top 5 people on tws?
@emilyyyyyy I came here about a week ago, so I am kinda new here.
After talking to everyone I found these people on my top 5 list
@RAGNAR
@cutie-cat
@US-Poet
@white-pegasus
@Laura-Anderson
I don't talk to them personally so some of them might have forgotten me already but
these people were extremely nice to me. Of course, the others were nice too but for me right now, these people make my top 5 list :)