Another poem!!!! I dunno I'm bored :P
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Friends are friends, haters are haters, bullies are bullies and all of them together make one big person a person can be whatever they want they never moan or they ever groan but once in a while it's good to be alone sometimes your sad or sometimes happy as Larry but even then you won't be as fun as the funniest person on earth there is only one of u and one of me were all unique in one human leak its good to be unique and sad lad it shows you care which is to me, fair so now I say thank you all and a goodnight or good morning cos we are in one big sphere which is called a world!
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@XxJadyBabyxX you good
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Hehehe thank you I try my best
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I've been going threw a lot lately so I do these to make people happy and to explain what I'm feeling
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@XxJadyBabyxX good job :thumbs_up: :thumbs_up:
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@Starr03 heyyy 😂
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This lacks proper structure and a form to be considered a poem. In fact it resembles a text of a rap song. Perhaps you should think of making lines between every verse, and not writing it as a one long sentence. I am not trying to be an asshole, but constructive criticism is the key to mastering any skill.
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@XxJadyBabyxX noice
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@XxJadyBabyxX Good One...😀
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@Charles-McPicle due u r mean
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@Charles-McPicle i hope u r happy now dude, u ruined my day 😭
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@Charles-McPicle oof dude
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@Charles-McPicle Hhaha that's what i was thinking 😂
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@XxJadyBabyxX I like it. You write what makes you feel better. If it helps you get things sorted then this has done its job. Doesn’t matter that it lacks this or that. Now if you want to work on structure and all dm me my lil bit. I’ll give you all the knowledge I have and guide you to the best of my abilities even though I myself am still a novice and am learning my craft.
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Good job.
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I support you.