@ClaireSheppard Several smaller bits may lead to easier critiquing of concepts, or certain plot points, or details. Just a thought.
I just made this story it's bye me hope you like it
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Wow you posted here
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Beside 'starlight' is wrote wrong in it
it's no story it is just something like a header and it looks alright
but i would prefer if you do away the typo :) -
@Hyde okay 😞😞😞😞
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@LIZABOO I don't said anything bad i just said there is a typo in the word starlight if you want to make a cover or something try to make it right and not wrong so there will be no mistakes :)
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@Hyde how??
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@LIZABOO you putted this banner here you have an way to correcting it and resending it ?
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If we ignore the spelling error in the title of the story(which is insignificant cuz people seldom read the title) - the story looks quite interesting.