@Max256 if I would be in mars I would signed the petition to save the nature .. please guys snap out little and we all live in earth and this is not spam or any bull,its about saving wild life sanctuary..
Nature exist we all do or else nothing !!!
I care about this cause, and here's why you should too. https://act.airalert.in/petitions/mollem-national-park-and-bhagvan-mahavir-wildlife-sanctuary-are-under-threat-in-goa?bucket=whatsapp_Gabriella-Goa-Citizens+-social-goa-mollem-sanctuary+_20200713&source=whatsapp-share-button&utm_campaign=&utm_source=whatsapp&share=d3ed945b-ee59-4ba5-b6cc-11bcdb8c479a
Freedom writers - writing, one story together "A strange journey" Chapter 4 - The Space Between Us
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Great! :D
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@evan-elderson IKNOW IKNOW IKNOW
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@evan-elderson This twist is PERFECT! I really really really liked it :thumbs_up_light_skin_tone:
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@evan-elderson said in Freedom writers - writing, one story together "A strange journey" Chapter 4 - The Space Between Us:
@fearlesswoman said in Freedom writers - writing, one story together "A strange journey" Chapter 4 - The Space Between Us:
@evan-elderson This twist is PERFECT! I really really really liked it :thumbs_up_light_skin_tone:
Thank you so much 😊. I love spinning stories in different directions. We used to do this as kids (technology was a lot different when I was younger).
Indeed ,very good writing .
as for twists ...
i once saw South Park creators say that during their writing they always pay attention to twists .Their stories must always contain But
ex- X hapens but Y occurs ...if they go more than 2 events without a but occurring. They erase that & rework that part.
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@evan-elderson I love starting out stories extremely vague, and having it start to pay as it goes on, and it's best if everything isn't fully explained, just things happen.
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